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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 2, 2008 23:19:04 GMT -5
Errorpaw knocked Stoneclaw down. "Woah." He breathed. "Great job!" He praised. "That was very smart!"
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 3, 2008 17:01:55 GMT -5
Errorpaw nodded, still not satisfied with his battle moves. Something's wrong. I didn't do well the last attack I made, and nor did I the move before that. Great StarClan, what in the world is wrong with me! He was upset, but it wasn't visible. Besides, no one would care... would they? I mean, it's myself I'm mad with. Should anybody really care?
((Man, I have so many unhappy and angsty characters, don't you think? Oh boy, Errorpaw is acting like how I envisioned Tigerstar when he was an apprentice.))
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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 3, 2008 18:10:20 GMT -5
(yea)
Stoneclaw licked Errorpaw. "Great job. Lets do a little bit more. Then we can go hunting!"
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 3, 2008 19:17:06 GMT -5
"Okay!" Errorpaw said half-heartedly. That was exactly what he was going to do! Had Stoneclaw read his mind?
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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 4, 2008 18:11:40 GMT -5
"Try this. Another move I made up. It requires a little bit of jumping though." He meowed. "Run to the right, like this." He jolted to the right. "Then, turn and jump over them. Then turn around." "If you can, turn in the air. We will work on that later though." He jumped over Errorpaw and turned around as fast as he could. "Then, while they are distracted, bite, scratch, whatever you want."
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 4, 2008 19:25:49 GMT -5
"O-okay." Errorpaw mewed, now nervous, "Tell me when to stop."
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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 5, 2008 22:28:32 GMT -5
"Here. I will talk you through it. Run to the right, then stop as fast as you can. Stop near me." He meowed encouragingly.
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 7, 2008 7:51:29 GMT -5
Errorpaw nodded. He ran to the right, and stopped to an abrupt halt near him.
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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 7, 2008 20:49:15 GMT -5
"Now turn a little to the left and jump over me. Then turn around fast."
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 8, 2008 8:50:34 GMT -5
Errorpaw followed his instructions, then added a bit while he was jumping over his mentor. He would've unsheathed his claws, but he didn't, and hit Stoneclaw on the face gently. Then he turned around quickly as he landed.
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Post by Moonbelle on Mar 8, 2008 11:13:16 GMT -5
"Good." Stoneclaw meowed. He shook his head a little to clear his thoughts. "Now, you would be able to attack as you wish. I am facing the wrong way, and you have distracted me!" He praised. He turned around "Good job. Hunting now?"
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Post by ^/Silver\^ on Mar 11, 2008 17:56:57 GMT -5
Errorpaw nodded. "Yes, please!" He felt awful as a wad of shame was building up, but he tried to hide it.
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